"Sophomoric writing, atrocious editing. I hate to be a naysayer, because I love great action books, great action characters, and good story lines. This effort, however, is laughably bad. The plots are dull and predictable. There is entirely too much dialogue, and the dialogue is at a level you thought you left behind in junior high school. Then there are the liberal sprinklings of typos, misspellings, and misused words. Rarely do I begrudge the time spent reading a book, but this is one of those occasions. Even if you can read it for free on Kindle, caveat emptor!"
Sorry it wasn't to your liking.